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  1. #1
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    The Autumn Twilight

    The autumn twilight passes by
    In flowing robes of whitest gold
    Great rows of corn that rustle soft
    Of tales of harvest often told

    And she upon her raven hair
    Does wear a veil of deepest blues
    'Tis made of silk and feather clouds
    And flows about her as she moves

    Upon her palm she holds an orb
    The moon that glows of purest light
    So luminous and near it seems
    More magic than all other nights

    The autumn twilight passes by
    And sings the softest lullaby
    Of days remembered by the sun
    And wild fowl's fading cry

  2. #2
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    rainydaysuicide,

    I love this! I saw this whole picture in my mind, evoked by your words! Thank you for sharing this!

    Colourgirl

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    That was great to read.

  4. #4
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    Thanks, guys. I wrote this poem for a contest back when I was in sixth grade and it won first place. It was actually published in an anthology. I've gone on to win several more contests and have had several more poems published. Writing is one of my only outlets right now. It's the only thing that helps. So, I really like to share my poems with people and it's awesome when they enjoy them as much as I do. Anyways, thanks again for the compliments!

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    Wow, you wrote that in 6th grade?! You have quite a talent, rainydaysuicide!

    Colourgirl

 

 

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