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  1. #1
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    She is trapped
    Her energy zapped
    No point in living
    No point in giving
    Her days seem bleak
    Her personality weak
    He rips her apart
    Tears at her heart
    But there comes a time
    To draw the line...
    Will he ever stop?

    Self-doubt c***les her mind
    Fear making her blind
    He's done this to her
    He's ripped her to shreds
    Wanting her dead
    And she is.
    She's dead inside
    with nowhere to hide
    Not wanting to face the world
    Having nothing to say
    And no faith to pray.
    panic at the disco! lol

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    Nicely written. So sad.

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    aww thank you. I'd been having a hard time with my husband and my depression... I'm a depressing sod I know but I tend to pour my heart out thru poetry. Thank you so much for reading and commenting
    panic at the disco! lol

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    very nice jade, you sound very sad hope it gets better, xxx freakyxxx

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    very nice jade, you sound very sad hope it gets better, xxx freakyxxx

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    Ty so much freaky. Yeh I get very up and down with my moods and am easily affected by things that happen and on that day my husband had been a bit of an idiot so I just sat and wrote. I find poetry and writing a great way of venting anger. If I didn'th ave the ability to write no doubt I would self-harm instead!!!!
    panic at the disco! lol

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    Nice yet sad poem. Well done Jade.

 

 

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