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NatC
02-26-2008, 04:29 AM
It's a dream.
I once lived it....or did I?
Im so lost.

Cant remember

It's leaving me,
Calling me,
I cant follow

It's not mine

I told it to go,
I hated it once
I used it

I loved it

I took what it gave,
I tired of it,
Hated it....

I miss it so much.

Can I have it again?
Can I ever be me?
Am I this or that?

Im torn

Between me....

And me.

jade
03-08-2008, 08:32 AM
:) aww thats beautiful, reminds me of the old me and the ill me... not knowing who I am anymore. Did you write it yourself?

NatC
03-08-2008, 11:47 AM
hey jade, thankyou, and yes i did lol

how ive been feling a lot lately

Natalie x

jenanne
03-10-2008, 12:24 AM
Wow Nat ty very much its how i have felt aswell very lovely poem

Love Jenx

musicmels
04-01-2008, 05:48 AM
that is really lovely and powerful. x i am new on here and i was so happy to see they had a poem forum, good to express yourself, i love to write too, lovely poem x :)

annie
04-02-2008, 12:09 PM
lovely